WALT:
We need trees because with out them we can't breath.
trees give us wood for the homes.
and Brings more birds.
trees grow food for the animals and for people.
Trees give bird nets for the baby.
to stars and a wish.
some thing I did good was putting in capetle letters in the starting of a sentience.
my 2 one is that next time I could Change my letters.
do you like what you see? do you like my writing?
I am in a year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School. My teacher is Miss van der Voort.
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Tuesday, 3 September 2019
Friday, 23 August 2019
NZ falcon
WALT find information and put it into our own words which we understand.
WALT created a drawing in google drawings.
We created this to show our learning using slides and google drawing.
WALT created a drawing in google drawings.
We created this to show our learning using slides and google drawing.
I like my falcon.
I like my writing. I wish I could do a back round.
I wish I could make the falcon same colour.
Friday, 5 July 2019
descriptive writing
WALT use descriptive words and language to make our writing more interesting.
The water in the pond as sparkly as the stars in the sky.
The little man is a fierce tiger.
We did this piece of writing to practise using descriptive words and language.
The brown tree swayed as slowly as a brown sloth.
The water in the pond as sparkly as the stars in the sky.
The little man is a fierce tiger.
The water is a shining star.
The enormous elephant's ears are huge.
The tree slowly walks on the grass.
Reflection: Next time I will try to find a moving
zebra. My next one is I did really good
on my writing.
zebra. My next one is I did really good
on my writing.
Monday, 13 May 2019
My family publish
WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one
thing or person at a time.
My family
In my family I have two sisters and two brothers and Nanny and Grandad and me.
My dad's name is Richard and he is 50 years old. He used to work in a crane in waiuku but now he is retired and we moved up to Mangonui.
My mum used to help old people do things like help them cross the road and do their jobs like vacuum clean.
My sister Harmony is 9 years old and she likes doing Mathletics on her Chromebook.
Breeze is 6 years old and she likes playing on the video Game and she likes playing hide and go seek.
Tyson is 4 in a half and he likes watching dinosaur movies and Sponge Bob SquarePants. And sometimes He is funny.
Refection:
Two stars are putting my key words into sentences and putting my my full stops and capital letters. Next time I wish I will work more on my introductions because was a little bit hard.
thing or person at a time.
My family
In my family I have two sisters and two brothers and Nanny and Grandad and me.
My dad's name is Richard and he is 50 years old. He used to work in a crane in waiuku but now he is retired and we moved up to Mangonui.
My mum used to help old people do things like help them cross the road and do their jobs like vacuum clean.
My sister Harmony is 9 years old and she likes doing Mathletics on her Chromebook.
Breeze is 6 years old and she likes playing on the video Game and she likes playing hide and go seek.
Tyson is 4 in a half and he likes watching dinosaur movies and Sponge Bob SquarePants. And sometimes He is funny.
Refection:
Two stars are putting my key words into sentences and putting my my full stops and capital letters. Next time I wish I will work more on my introductions because was a little bit hard.
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