WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one
thing or person at a time.
My family
In my family I have two sisters and two brothers and Nanny and Grandad and me.
My dad's name is Richard and he is 50 years old. He used to work in a crane in waiuku but now he is retired and we moved up to Mangonui.
My mum used to help old people do things like help them cross the road and do their jobs like vacuum clean.
My sister Harmony is 9 years old and she likes doing Mathletics on her Chromebook.
Breeze is 6 years old and she likes playing on the video Game and she likes playing hide and go seek.
Tyson is 4 in a half and he likes watching dinosaur movies and Sponge Bob SquarePants. And sometimes He is funny.
Refection:
Two stars are putting my key words into sentences and putting my my full stops and capital letters. Next time I wish I will work more on my introductions because was a little bit hard.
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