WALT:
We need trees because with out them we can't breath.
trees give us wood for the homes.
and Brings more birds.
trees grow food for the animals and for people.
Trees give bird nets for the baby.
to stars and a wish.
some thing I did good was putting in capetle letters in the starting of a sentience.
my 2 one is that next time I could Change my letters.
do you like what you see? do you like my writing?

hi brookyln I think your little story up there is really good and we should look after our trees and our invioment.mybe you could look back and put two ensted of to when doing you reflection. love your blog
ReplyDeleteHi brookyln I think your story was very good. Next time you could make your swriting stems a bit better
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